What do you think of my song?

Question

I'm a Musician who's coming out with an album soon and I'm putting out what people think of my lyrics before i pick the songs to be on my album.Religion.


Prophets of Evolution


Your mind’s in his box
You’ll never see beyond the one who talks

Speak out
Or you’ll never be known
Reach out
Kill your God so your not alone

Follow no word but hear our lies
We’ll show no heaven beyond the skies

We are
The prophets of evolution
The star
Is god’s pollution

We mentions names of your devils and god
We got the gall to disbelieve and prod

The stars will save you
This we promise
We’re the ones to listen to
We’re honest

We are
The prophets of evolution
The star
Is god’s pollution

Death to God and all the deceivers
The follower falls before the believers

Speak out
Or you’ll never be known
Reach out
Kill your God so your not alone

The prophets of evolution
The stars are our word
The box you dwell in is not the solution
We cut God’s strings and are free like the bird

This song is about questioning Religion and Society but it also takes the part of people who preach Evolution. It's not against religion but merely sattiring that both sides lie and decieve to gain followers and both have valid and unvalid idealogies.

Answer 1

Not really feeling it.

Answer 2

i think people would be offended by the way you talk about God and stuff. but, that's just me. i'd have to hear it with music in order to fully judge it.

Answer 3

i personaly think it suxx...but who noes crackas may have another opinion