A Memory by: Clint
A Memory is like a shimer in a pond its their but eventually fades.A bad memory is like looking in the mirror in the morning and realizing you are a mess, but soon after you clean yourself up that memory is forgottin. A Memory lasts as long as a quick glance at yourself in a mirror you, quickly look but soon look again because you either forgot to fix something or you thought you saw something. A uncared memory is like the care for someone you dislike it is coldly dismissed like the expelling of carbon dioxide. Keep your Memories in the palm of your hand for when you see your end, Memories will be all you have.
2006-07-03 18:18:24 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
cool
2006-07-03 18:21:19 · answer #1 · answered by coldkiller11112 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im gnna rate it on a scale of 1-10 1 being bad 10 good i give it an 10...holding on to memories is very important i like ur poem..u could try to get it published...go to www.poetry.com
2006-07-03 18:22:46 · answer #2 · answered by Lilmisssassy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mirror mirror on the wall who is the best poet of them all?you! That was immensely enjoyable.nice way to start the day,take care
2006-07-03 22:23:55 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it alot. I think it is written very well and theres a lot of feeling behind it. nice work.
2006-07-03 18:21:57 · answer #4 · answered by Megan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I normally like poetry to include the word "Nantucket" somewhere...
2006-07-03 18:21:40 · answer #5 · answered by Homey D. Clown 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is related to memory,
2006-07-03 19:08:12 · answer #6 · answered by fanah 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hmmmm, not bad.
2006-07-03 18:21:45 · answer #7 · answered by angel_64 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really like it too
2006-07-03 18:26:10 · answer #8 · answered by Isabelia 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
DEEP
2006-07-03 18:23:44 · answer #9 · answered by jse3_1962 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good!!
2006-07-03 20:43:40 · answer #10 · answered by cher 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋