idea:
_____________ gets trapped into movies and is always sucked
(main character)
out @ the good parts and is forced to ask random people what happened. Then gets back into the movie(s).
if it sucks pleez tell me.
sum1 help me write a story!!!
I NEED INS[IRATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-07-03 15:21:56 · 24 answers · asked by honni~graham 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Celebrities
go on and brain-storm,don't worri if ppl is gonna sopport u are not.:)
2006-07-03 15:36:19 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, it has to play as a comedy, and it reminds me most of "Groundhog Day" with Bill Murray. I would rewrite the premise as follows. Every crucial moment of a man's(woman's)life is blank, that is, he/she never knows what exactly happens, because just as the moment is coming to a climax, suddenly the main character is drawn away into a neutral playing field, maybe even a children's playground, where they are forced to wait until the actual drama has been played out, at which time they are thrust back into the action without the knowledge of whatever big decisions or profound moments have taken place. Then they are left, stranded, to try and make up time and figure out what just happened. I say, thumbs up, now write some scenarios. Sincerely, UC Steve.
2006-07-03 22:32:14 · answer #2 · answered by UCSteve 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sure this doesn't help but don't use the last action hero's theme of getting a character out of the silver screen and into real life. That movie sucked.
2006-07-03 22:24:22 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Nina♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ITS CALLED LAST ACTION HERO!
you should make one where ninja goes around killing zombies and hippies to save a hooker with a heart of gold from her addiction to poptarts somewere in eastern Utah so that this year Tom Cruise does not ruin christman for the first time in 23 decade.
2006-07-03 22:26:43 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Could be interesting...............make sure the people he/she asks have answers (entertaining answers). Maybe your character could get some wrong info and tries to interact in the movie using this wrong info, and has funny or unexpected results.
Or, each time he/she gets back into the movie(s), he changes characters...........
2006-07-03 22:30:27 · answer #5 · answered by artistagent116 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i don't really understand the plot you just need to work on it a little more cuz it seems off task to me you don't really have a setting also you need more characters well good look i'm sure it'll be good when your done it doesn't suck its just not complete
this was written by tori rissa's friend (a fellow author)
2006-07-03 22:27:57 · answer #6 · answered by Marissa S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, it is fairly bad to terrible. How would you build a plot around that? If that kept happening to someone, why would they keep going to the movies?
2006-07-03 22:28:19 · answer #7 · answered by Spike Spiegel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly it wasnt that great but if your just starting out as a writer then it wasnt too bad. With a little more practice you could be a great author.
2006-07-04 23:38:22 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
go 4 it
2006-07-03 22:24:03 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I need more of an explanation before offering an opinion.
2006-07-03 22:23:51 · answer #10 · answered by Blue 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u need more to it.. a story line is usually a little more in depth. keep working on it.
2006-07-03 22:55:03 · answer #11 · answered by Dee J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋