Some days,
I look to the sky.
And I ask why,
Why can't I find her.
In my dreams,
I see her smile.
And I would walk a mile,
To find that smile.
And when I close my eyes,
I can see her.
Though a blur,
I know she is the one.
One thing I know,
Find her I might not.
And thoughI dream a lot,
I still search, day after day.
2006-07-03 09:51:30 · 9 answers · asked by Sammy Hagar 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
Did you compose the instrumentation to this too?.
2006-07-03 09:54:37 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A mile would be too short of a distance to walk,if you want to get a dove, my dear. Ask older people, they know how life goes. Move your funky lazy rhyming *** more often, and possibly out of your room, then... :)
Wash your head in cold water if blur... it is hot outside. Or, go check out a museum..... or a church - they have cool interiors or optimized air conditioning. Maybe you run into some dove-like creature there.
2006-07-05 11:15:48 · answer #2 · answered by Hibernating Ladybird 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After all your search you might realize that smile is not for you. Get realistic . Open your eyes and look around. There are many smart ones around whose face is definitely not blurred. Find one for yourself otherwise you grow old dreaming and your dream girl still gives you those youthful smiles.
2006-07-06 08:04:41 · answer #3 · answered by sunshine 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you're off to a good start! As a writer, I would say I think the beauty of your overall theme is being lost in the inconsistant rhyming. You might want to consider making this a non-rhyming poem.
Best wishes.
2006-07-03 09:56:43 · answer #4 · answered by K M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dream on Cash man
You will find your dove
Someday when you realize love.
Not until then my friend
Will you truly know
How sweet it is to be wanted
As I know I am not
So twins we are,
Friends to the end
Lonely and sad.
Forever............
2006-07-03 11:01:23 · answer #5 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bad, really bad. You might get a better response in the literature section in stead of this one.
2006-07-03 09:55:07 · answer #6 · answered by judy_r8 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It usually happens when you quit looking for it. Relax, it wont be all ups and no downs.
2006-07-03 09:57:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Congratulations!!!! Who is the girl?
All the best.
It is good.
2006-07-03 09:55:05 · answer #8 · answered by JK 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's beautiful! but when you find her, please, don't read this to her
2006-07-03 09:55:28 · answer #9 · answered by Jane 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋