The reasons why I do what I do.
Can it be true I do it for you.
When you feel blue I am there for you.
When someone hurt you I am there to prove.
The reasons why I do what I do.
From boxing to wrestling and so much more.
Can it be true I do it for you?
The reasons why I do what I do.
In fact are many, so I’ll state a few.
Let’s start with protection my form of affection.
Strong minded strong bodied and very quite skilled.
Don’t take it wrong I love what I do.
But sometime I ask myself this question.
Can it be true I do it for you?
The reasons why I do what I do.
Don’t really matter if it is tough or easy
Cause the thought of that breathtaking smile
Stay photographed in mind it works like fuel to keep me going
Now that I think about it I am fueled on love
And you are my gas station priced at one kiss one hug
Can it be true I do it for you?
2006-07-03 08:05:39 · 11 answers · asked by josh 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
The reasons why I do what I do.
Can it be true I do it all just for you.
My goals in life are simple even if they’re a lot
Here are three things I hope I can do.
One to be a Marine Corps sniper
Two to join the FBI in New York
Three is to always protect the ones I love
Can it be true I do it for you?
The reasons why I do what I do.
From boxing to writing and every thing else
Can it be true I do it for you and not for me
Sorry if I sound a little crazy
I guess I am just a fool driven by love
Or maybe a fool in love with an angel
You decided because I am still deciding
Weather I am just crazy in love or in love with an angel
Can it be true I do it for you?
2006-07-03 08:05:54 · update #1
too long
2006-07-03 08:06:57 · answer #1 · answered by vip333 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
The structure is good, but the poem started falling apart near the end. The rhymes were good in the beginning, but they got monotonous. A good beginning to poetry. I think you should not try as hard and rewrite the poem from the beginning. Honesty, is what I give you.
2006-07-03 15:14:38 · answer #2 · answered by Teacher 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its too long to read online if i was in my poetry class i would give it a shot. but for the little i did read it was ok
2006-07-03 15:09:26 · answer #3 · answered by danielle s 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey josh just like you said the reason why you do what you do and my respond to that is keep doing what you do man..... you will get there.... this really sound good to me l aint go lie to you good job.....
2006-07-03 15:19:09 · answer #4 · answered by tusweet 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to long, not bad though. you reread it and see if it all makes sense to you. Only you know if it is saying what you really want it to.
lol
2006-07-03 15:10:25 · answer #5 · answered by hummingbird 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it makes no sense. You sound like a looser asking for love.
2006-07-03 15:09:17 · answer #6 · answered by lucky 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its too long but its good i like it
2006-07-03 15:09:44 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's the biggest pile of s*hit i've ever read.
2006-07-04 00:26:48 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's better than I could do.
2006-07-03 15:08:38 · answer #9 · answered by big_dog832001 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too long cant read it all
2006-07-03 15:08:13 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋