Hello,
Can you suggest tabs?
Can you tell me if this is any good?
It's about being stabbed in the back by ex-friend...
Fast, upbeat tempo, with Lyrics at breakneck speed!!
Strangled (C)
You pulled the wool over my eyes
Left me betrayed ready to die
I can't take that lying down
With you I'm gonna go to town
You thought I was a goner
Worn out beyond recognition
Back to challenge your power
Be the cause of division
Gonne give you some arsenic juice
Blow your head through the roof
My time is here revenge will be sweet
When you and I next meet
Abandoned in my time of need
Stabbed in the heart left to bleed
Choked on my own vomit
Screaming in pain
Is it your way to kill and maim
You thought I was a goner
Worn out beyond recognition
Can you head on much longer
I'm back now and so much stronger
Gonna give you some arsenic juice
Blow your head throught the roof
My time of revenge has passed
You're gone and I'm last
2006-06-30 11:23:19 · 22 answers · asked by East Bay Punk 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Hey,
I don't need anger management!!
Just saying what I think, people!!
Thank-you!!
2006-06-30 11:57:07 · update #1
I've seen a lot of your lyrics, and in my opinion they are too depressing, not the way they are written, you have good command of english, but the content is too dismal, we have enough of voilence in society, and that goes wherever we live, what is needed is something new and refreshing, a breath of fresh air amid all the stress and hassel of everyday life, and not a discription of something we have probably seen on the way home from work or in the weekly rag.
Why don't you try to get away from the " dont look at me or I'll knock off your knee caps" approach and try something the whole world is in dire need of and of course that is LOVE and not Hatred or revenge. go on give it a go.
then post it on here and see what everyone thinks.
what can you lose by doing that.
2006-06-30 11:35:02 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 23⤊ 4⤋
I grew up in the 60's. You think you have problems. Sounds like
you are still young compared to me, so some good advice,
hang in there. Pretty soon you too will be "65".
2006-06-30 12:31:40 · answer #2 · answered by babo02350 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, it's all a bit "done" - there are a million songs out there just like yours. Try something a little more original. Sorry I wasn't more positive, but all criticism is useful if it has been solicited. G'luck!
2006-07-01 03:08:25 · answer #3 · answered by zara c 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Perfect!! Mental institution next!
2006-06-30 11:35:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I agree with traveleze get some anger management.
2006-06-30 11:51:00 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
May I recommend anger therapy? www.angertherapy.co.uk
2006-06-30 11:30:10 · answer #6 · answered by traveleze 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You even smoked my last smoke you ..........(whatever you feel like provoking at this point!!)
Now that serious grief ya got there buddy!
Cheer up!
2006-06-30 11:34:15 · answer #7 · answered by AZRAEL è 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
seems pretty violent and too much anger to my liking
2006-06-30 11:45:34 · answer #8 · answered by piyo006 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great Lyrics, but very angry... You know the rest!
D*
2006-07-01 00:07:01 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hello,
What are tabs?
This is OK
Cheers!!
2006-06-30 18:17:53 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋