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Dear Shirley Galloway,

It has been brought to my attention that you have sold the apartment building to Mrs. Michelle Neufeld. It has also been brought to my attention that Mrs. Neufeld would like everyone out and has possession on July 12th, 2006. I would like to address a few things that I am sure you are aware of.
First of all we pay rent monthly and have to give you one month written notice before moving out, you must also do this if you want us out. An exact quote from the “renting a home” pamphlet provided by the Rentals man stating The Residential Tenancies Act is “the landlord must give you one month's notice to move out”. I also have to give one month written notice so here is mine, I will be moving out as of the end of July.
It is also apparent that I will need to pay $275 for this month rent, but it appears as follows. Again out of The Residential Tenancies Act it states that “Your rent may be increased if the landlord gives you three months notice

or three weeks notice if you pay your rent weekly. You can ask the Rentals man to make the landlord charge the old rent until you receive proper notice”. Since you have increased my rent without proper notice I am adding that $50 extra dollars to my July rent. Also there is the damage deposit that is added to that which is $100 dollars which can be added to my July rent. So all added up you got $150 for the month of July, but apparently you only own it till July 12th, so I will owe the remaining $125 to Mrs. Neufeld.
It’s been nice renting from you and hope to see you around town, take care.

Answer 1

Sounds like you've got an evil ***** of a land-lady, there. Get everyone in your apartment block to move out all at once, make her go bankrupt! LOL

Answer 2

Well thought out and very clear

Answer 3

Great

Answer 4

You have some cheap rent.

Letter sounds good.

Answer 5

Really professional!

Answer 6

that works

Answer 7

Very good! :)

Answer 8

good