Here is a rap I wrote. Is it good? Would you buy it? Will it blow me up? On a scale of 1-10 what is it?
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Brandt's My Name
I’m Brandt White! (Who?)
Brandt White!
And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (What?)
I’m Brandt White! (Who?)
Brandt White!
And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (Ohh)
Sev Sev Five Double Three Five O
Thats my home phone number
When you call I'll be stackin' my doe [Disk mix]
I'd like to say it but I can't
"I'm your ordinary, unchanged Brandt."
Brandt's the name, it's still the same"
Who's to blame? Could be the fame
Could be the cash. Could be your dame
I'll blow up quick and run the game
I got new moves. I'm payin' my dues
Don't try to compete cause your destined to loose
Slim Thug, Mike Jones, Bun B. and Paul Wall
I'll come up behind them when they start to fall
When I see the chicks, I'm actin' mellow
They're all on me before I say "Hello"
I got a crew on the East Coast and on the West
You better sit back down and make way, I'm the best
I got some dime, I'm in my prime
Don't waste my time while you fall behind
I’m Brandt White! (Who?)
Brandt White!
And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (What?)
I’m Brandt White! (Who?)
Brandt White!
And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (Ohh)
Sev Sev Five Double Three Five O
Thats my home phone number
When you call I'll be stackin' my doe
When they say I can't rap, screw them
My rhymes are phat, I'm the next Eminem
I might not be black with a dark skin tone,
But I can spit a verse on a microphone
These liberals don't understand me
Cause I keep my 12 gauge handy
I'm Brandt White from the Dirty South
I don't have to swear and use a dirty mouth
I'm gonna stay fly. Won't drink or get high
Don't need it to get by. Thats not how I'm gonna die
I'm a full time pimp, but sometimes I rhyme
I'm up in the game and now I'm feelin' fine
So quit actin’ so dang silly
You can’t screw with this milli
And when you see me on MTV
You'll know I'm as good as Pimp C
You do not want to fight me
I'll beat you in my white tee
You can come to a show to see me
It will only cost a small fee
I’m Brandt White! (Who?)
Brandt White!
And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (What?)
I’m Brandt White! (Who?)
Brandt White!
And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (Ohh)
Sev Sev Five Double Three Five O
Thats my home phone number
When you call I'll be stackin' my doe
2006-06-29 08:37:09 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
im sorry dude but i would give u a 3 at the most.nobody wants 2 hear bout yaself so much step ya game up n write some new rhymes n then post em back on tha net.tha only thing u got goin is ya hooks
madame st.queenie(tha bronx is back n full effect)
2006-06-29 08:46:52 · answer #1 · answered by LuGeriah Brown-MaGgarone 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its a big 10
2006-06-29 08:43:47 · answer #2 · answered by love_basketballgurl09 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yo u aint mike jones and mike jones is gay u say ya name 2 much but besides dat its aiyte
2006-06-29 08:46:28 · answer #3 · answered by tiko 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
blown up! is a very good expression, Yes this song will most likely get you blown up lol
2006-06-29 08:55:40 · answer #4 · answered by too_too_juicy 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
'Cause your rhymes are tight.
Plural noun plural verb.
2006-06-29 08:42:17 · answer #5 · answered by Wise Old Witch 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Gawd!... yeah , we need more of this! (sarcasm)
2006-06-29 08:43:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋