Okay, does my poetry suck? I am eleven years old. I want honest no-**** answers okay?
http://allpoetry.com/poets/Me%20Is%20Bri
2006-06-28 12:04:30 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Games & Recreation ➔ Hobbies & Crafts
No! Actually it is quite good. Just watch mixing your verb tenses within the same sentence. Please keep writing, the world needs more talented poets. Your poetry may help someone other than you get through a time that is overwhelming them.
2006-06-28 12:57:26 · answer #1 · answered by songbird092962 5 · 8⤊ 2⤋
Oh, girl so young you have talent. Those are beautiful, you should enter them in a poetry contest and who knows you might win some money.
2006-06-28 19:18:19 · answer #2 · answered by red dragon 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes
2006-06-28 19:07:25 · answer #3 · answered by go_irish_34 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. It's hard to believe it came from someone so young. Not bad at all. Be interesting to see what you write when you're 20.
2006-06-28 19:10:53 · answer #4 · answered by gene_frequency 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. I like your poetry. The Bubbles one remind me of me.
2006-06-28 19:09:15 · answer #5 · answered by brewers_babe49 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seems okay to me. I don't care for poetry.
2006-06-28 19:11:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the bubble poem made good use of image, it felt to be the more complex of them all... the others didn't suck but this one stood out.
2006-06-28 22:30:58 · answer #7 · answered by Mandy P 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no, it is good
you need to really give it all tho... write about stuff that means stuff to you... tap more into your emotions and don't hold back
you are very good, but you will develop more as you grow and experience more...
don't give up, there is talent there!
2006-06-28 19:12:35 · answer #8 · answered by jubiejubejubajube 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, you're 11, have a good looking website and it's your poetry.
It looks good to me. Keep it up!
2006-06-28 23:00:53 · answer #9 · answered by KERMIT M 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its dark and scary... i love it try to find one of those poetry contests you'll make a fortune
2006-06-28 19:09:26 · answer #10 · answered by captspankey 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋