song! can you finish this verce/?

Question

i`m writting a song at this moment, but i`m stuck, can you help me to finish this verce?
I close my eyes and drift away, into the magic night i softly say, a silent prayer, like lovers do, then fall asleep, and dream of you........... can anyone help?

Answer 1

I close my eyes and drift away, into the magic night i softly say, a silent prayer, like lovers do, then fall asleep, and dream of you.

don't wanna live my life alone, what good's a dog without a bone?
I need you here right by my side, into each others' arms we'll glide.

your eyes are like diamonds they sparkle in the sun, and all I want to see's your face, until my life is done.

and then we'll go together to that place up in the sky,
and on out winged horses, together we will fly...

way way across the valleys, together on the run,
and in our final moments go into the setting sun.


Is it any good? I just came up with it now.

Answer 2

I close my eyes and drift away ,into the magic night i softly say, a silent prayer,like lovers do, then fall asleep,and dream of you...

(Iam not a poet but still want to help you)

want to catch this moment and for ever hold on to,
you are my question and answer too.

Answer 3

I close my eyes and drift away, into the magic night i softly say, a silent prayer, like lovers do, then fall asleep, and dream of you.

Your eyes tell a story, and tells me not to worry, the day will come when we'll be together, holding in arms - each other forever, your face shines bright, more bright than the morning light. I wish this dream never fades away, and I drown in your love like this everyday!

Answer 4

I close my eyes and drift away, into the magic night i softly say, a silent prayer, like lovers do, then fall asleep, and dream of you and find myself in another world. wishing that this dream would never end i lay there under the stars thinking of you

Answer 5

I close my eyes and drift away, into the magic night i softly say, a silent prayer, like lovers do, then fall asleep, and dream of you........... you miserable, two-faced, lying sack of .....no?

Answer 6

sure or perhaps as yet another large music comes on that i love I stay for that too etc that's how my battery died contained in the course of the nighttime in a street relax end fifty seven miles faraway from homestead... I nonetheless do it besides the undeniable fact that lol

Answer 7

I think Roy Orbison has done it first... 'In Dreams', The next line is... In dreams I walk with you
In dreams I talk with you,
In dreams your mine all of the time,
we're together in dreams in dreams,. But just before the dawn, I awake and find you gone....etc......

Answer 8

my dream ended,when i saw your glass eye ,with all disapointment i started to cry.!!! your **** was fat ,your belly was too ....what the fook was i gonna do ??? i went downstairs to get me a drink ,i didnt know what the fook to think ,went back to bed and tried to sleep,had to count a hundred sheep ......morning came i took a look ,my dream was real what the fxxk!! i felt inside i was going to die ,next to my bed there s the glass eye !!!.

Answer 9

I open my eyes, the morning's here,
It makes me smile, to feel you here,
With me.
My prayer came true
You're mine it's true...

Hope this works I write alot of songs myself.

Answer 10

For love like yours,
my poor heart begs,
though your breath smells like,
rotten eggs.