sad or sweet?

Question

im not sure what to say really...each drop that falls on this swamped heart is a song i've written in vain, so why do i complain when i see the clouds gather in the masses? i deserve every punch you've thrown with your pretty lips. words i cant even repeat unless i lose what sanity is left of me. the way you looked as i walked away was the most gorgeous thing ive ever seen....then i closed the door and walked out. what does all this mean? i dont know but you show me how much of a loser i can be and yet i just agree.

Answer 1

aaron? What made you deserve those "punches?" It is sad....but sweet? I'm not sure about sweet. She shows you how much of a loser you can be yet you disagree. You are saying you aren't a loser? And that you can see through her eyes what she thinks make you a loser right? Yet you and I both know you aren't a loser?

Answer 2

That was beautiful!!! The feelings were sad but sweet.You must be torn with alll of these feelings.It created such an emotion when i read it I cant even describe. So again i say this poem has the best both feelings have to offer.

Answer 3

It is sad, but sweet at the same time, unless you've done something really really bad, like cheated on her, I think she'll love it

Answer 4

It is a little sad especially the last line but i really like it. You are a very excellent writer you have a lot of things to share. I enjoy reading your work thanks for sharing.

Answer 5

I really liked it! But if I had to choose between the two, sad probably.

Answer 6

Sad but great.

Answer 7

sad

Answer 8

sad

Answer 9

sad

Answer 10

sad