This is the sentence: At the beginning of the novel the Joad family was a typical one with men as the head of the family, but soon that changed because of hardships and obstacles they find in California; there Ma took in charge.
2006-06-27 08:26:36 · 4 answers · asked by khatti 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
At the outset of the novel the Joad's were a typical family, one with a man heading the family. That soon changed. Due to the hardships and obstacles they found in California, Ma eventually took charge.
One mistake many people make when they write are runon sentences that make it difficult for readers to understand and enjoy. Its hard work reading an extra long sentence and interpreting the punctuation.
When I move from draft to final one of the things I do is attempt to simplify my writing. Dont be scared to break it into more than one sentence. it may improve the clarity and impact of your writing.
2006-06-27 08:39:09 · answer #1 · answered by answers999 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Joad family was a typical patriarchal family at the beginning of the novel; however, because of hardships and obstacles that they faced in California, Ma soon took charge
2006-06-27 15:30:25 · answer #2 · answered by silverdragonn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i wont write it for u. but the second answer is the best.
2006-06-27 15:50:18 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I could. But I'm not doing it for you.
2006-06-27 15:29:12 · answer #4 · answered by jdc591 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋