If we can try to understand
We will be happy and make real friends
Because we are all humans
And deserve to love and care
And it doesn't matte who wins
As long as we are happy
And satisfied with the beauty
That shines through in nature
The most beautiful picture
Is the best of you
And everything you knew
Became understanding and true
Life is wonderful when we are grateful
For everything we have that seems impossible
I hope that one day
This poems enters the heart of someone who can say
Yes I understand the love we share
The great time we show to care
Because life is made for us to learn
And beging to earn
The respect from everyone
Till life and the world is done
We are all strong and never wrong
Because our minds speak what's honest
And what's right, is the best.
This poem is called"We can try"
I just wrote it, I am a poem writer and have written about 60 poems, it just gives joy and happiness. I hope you love it.
2006-06-26 08:03:34 · 12 answers · asked by Sophia 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Hi, there.
What a beautiful nice poem you wrote! This is so beautiful and I really love it!
During reading your poem, I almost cried 'cause it was really beautiful and nice about our lives with happiness and joy. It reminds of me many things around the world during reading this beautiful poem of yours.
I would love to learn many things about the world to make our lives worthy from now on and on. The world is always moving on and on and we will do our best in our lives with happiness and joy altogether!
PS May I read your other poems little by little? Thank you.
You make my day!
Cheers!
Selena!
2006-06-26 15:57:30 · answer #1 · answered by alma_selena 3 · 5⤊ 3⤋
Rolling Stones Givess it "4 thumbss up"
2006-06-26 08:06:57 · answer #2 · answered by Riteshi P 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you are the actual writer of this poem then it is really good for you. keep it up. one advice, if you want people can sing it also then use meter. nice poem.
2006-06-26 08:17:07 · answer #3 · answered by sonu 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job...sorry just because you rhyme a few lines does not make you a poet.
2006-06-26 08:11:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is very long and it has no flow and you might want toshorten it and make it rhyme better but hey keep writing it is good for you
2006-06-26 08:09:22 · answer #5 · answered by jk poet 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bit too long. If shorter, then yes.
2006-06-26 08:07:34 · answer #6 · answered by euges116 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it. Interesting.
2006-06-26 08:07:48 · answer #7 · answered by charmed45390 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, it's good. Let us know where we can see your other poems....
2006-06-26 08:07:27 · answer #8 · answered by Shqiptare 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you like my avatar, I like your poem!
2006-06-26 08:06:36 · answer #9 · answered by PrincessP 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poems really nice, i like it.
2006-06-26 08:12:52 · answer #10 · answered by chilly babe 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋