I'm keeping my eyes peeled for glances of what this is all about about.
But seeing all I'm feeling, I'm tripping and falling being consumed with all you mean to me.
So is there a line to draw when all you can do is think, breathe, see, feel and taste love?
Or is it the way leading you blind into the best life you've ever dreamed of? (who needs site then)?
You, my dear, are the sun burning all the clouds that are left above all the earth, and I find myself staring straight into you.
Therefore, looking away, I can't see anything at all (except spots surrounding my vision and taking over)
So never cease to shine so I may continue to be blinded by the best thing I've ever known- you.
2006-06-26 08:03:00 · 8 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
10 - wow. that's all i can say
2006-06-26 08:28:58 · answer #1 · answered by ladyrn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9
2006-06-26 20:58:46 · answer #2 · answered by doglady 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 9/10 rock on!
2006-06-26 15:12:42 · answer #3 · answered by la♥chiva 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 1/2 that was really good. I really like the last line.
Did you write it for that girl that broke your heart? : ( You kind of started telling me about it.
2006-06-26 15:07:32 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
81/2
2006-06-26 15:06:16 · answer #5 · answered by fuel91 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 1/2..
whoever you wrotethis for is obviously a very luck girl.
this is great
[j]
2006-06-26 15:07:55 · answer #6 · answered by the_hippie_kid 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9. It starts off really cliche but the end is so beautiful...I wish a guy would write that for me :-)
2006-06-26 15:16:28 · answer #7 · answered by Susie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10...it was a great piece of writing
2006-06-26 16:01:09 · answer #8 · answered by its ME !!! 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋