(chorus)
The cross is red
Red with blood
Now bow your head and pray
Pray to the Father and ask for peace
He will comfort, He will save
(Verse 1)
A young man sits by the bed
In the bed is his true love
She does not wake today
The doctors still come, but say the same
They're not sure if she ever will
They said the same today
He bows his head and prays
(Chorus)
~That's just the chorus and first verse, I'm still working on it, but what do you think?
2006-06-26 05:14:49 · 5 answers · asked by Loved By Someone Above 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
It sounds pretty!!
2006-06-26 05:17:46 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really nice you should write more songs open up the horizons of your imagination and continue writing such beautiful lyrics
2006-06-26 12:19:38 · answer #2 · answered by magic_devil89 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
An obvious talent. Just don't write these while you're flying.
2006-06-26 12:24:35 · answer #3 · answered by Milo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
these lyrics are good. sharing the world the truth and power of jesus and god is always a good thing. keep it up!
2006-06-26 12:18:21 · answer #4 · answered by ~jervi mervi~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like them
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2006-06-26 12:18:56 · answer #5 · answered by kyana w 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋