1.Uneven as was the moonlight over the pond,there wes a harmony between light and shade,rhythmic as a well-know melody played on the violin.
2.The moonlight on the pond was not uniform but light and shadow made up a harmonious rhythm like a beautiful tune played on a violine.
2006-06-25 23:56:36 · 9 answers · asked by wz_tiffany 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
The first one sounds more like poetry and the second one just sounds like a description.
The first one is definately the prettiest way of saying it!
2006-06-26 00:03:58 · answer #1 · answered by soapybubbles 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I prefer 2 mainly because I don't think the word "uneven" works.
2006-06-26 00:01:35 · answer #2 · answered by John 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like number 2, only because I do not like poetry.
2006-06-26 00:05:24 · answer #3 · answered by jbpammy004 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like second one best
2006-06-26 00:08:00 · answer #4 · answered by Kev 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#2, I thought the first one sounded a little pretentious - sorry.
2006-06-26 02:00:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
#2, Because it has a continuous flow. #1 is broken, and therefore, doesn't mesh together well.
2006-06-26 04:06:36 · answer #6 · answered by Abstract 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I guess the second is the best !
2006-06-26 01:37:56 · answer #7 · answered by Abey Mohamed 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#2 -- well, the presentation is obviously clearer and grammer is better. ;-)
2006-06-26 00:08:35 · answer #8 · answered by AgentFox 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you need to get out you wierd ****
2006-06-26 00:14:16 · answer #9 · answered by william j 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋