I have an angel,
she is so sweet.
the more i talk to her
the faster my heart beats
I have an angel,
I know that she is real.
we will have a lifetime together
a Paradise we will build.
I have an angel,
she is so far away.
I love her so much.
I wish she was here today.
I have an angel,
she means so much to me.
one day we will be together.
How happy I will be.
I have an angel,
she will not fly away.
She loves me more than anything.
What else can I say.
I have an angel,
together we will be.
And she will tell me,
how I set her free.
I have an angel,
she is so pretty.
And one day she'll give me,
an angel that looks like me.
This poem was for my girlfriend. I wrote it about 2 years ago. may 25 my girlfriend gave me my angel. Her name is Aspyn! Tell me what u think of my poem
2006-06-25 21:52:02 · 14 answers · asked by perfect_demise 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Really nice. A beautiful poem for the beautiful people in your life. Make it into a manuscript and frame it or keep it in your photo album so your little girl will be able to treasure it too when she's older.
2006-06-26 00:23:46 · answer #1 · answered by Bugsy 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I have an angel,
she is so pretty.
And one day she'll give me,
an angel that looks like me.
Im pretty damn sure that this part might have made her cry.. It is lovely.. Im a guy and not into sensitive stuff much but to be frank, I really think this is a good one..I tried a few times to write a poem to ma girl but it sounded like a frigging rhapsody so I gave up the whole idea. Read this to your wife keeping her by your side when you two are old.. Even Aspyn's kids will love to read their grand father's poem.. Preserve it for good.
2006-06-26 05:39:27 · answer #2 · answered by Teejay 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2006-06-26 04:57:35 · answer #3 · answered by G 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good. love the name aspyn. im sure she is daddies little angel. if the poem works for you then thats all that matters.
2006-06-26 07:17:42 · answer #4 · answered by Susie Y 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
quiet good if you under 16 of age otherwise not bad but needs upgrading! - OR ill steal yo girl errtime i wanna!
tried my best to be reasonable coz a poem to me ain't a poem if there ain't biacches & hho's
2pac-ilips now & foreva
2006-06-26 05:04:00 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that is really good. You must really like her to have written that poem. Girls love getting stuff like that you dont always have to just say i love u, u could show it like u did. well done.
2006-06-26 09:03:24 · answer #6 · answered by Brittney 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem expressed your feelings clearly
2006-06-26 05:15:28 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's cute very nice beautiful poem
2006-06-26 05:10:31 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice name ur angel 's got!!!!!!!!
but sorry dear, honestly its not much good a poem!
2006-06-26 06:13:02 · answer #9 · answered by i_m_kiinda_kind 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aw that was cute, sweetie.
2006-06-26 05:10:42 · answer #10 · answered by ♥Ms. Heart♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋