this isnt my best stuff, but i was moved to write today so i just started.....
im not sure what to say really...each drop that falls on this swamped heart is a song i've written in vain, so why do i complain when i see the clouds gather in the masses? i deserve every punch you've thrown with your pretty lips. words i cant even repeat unless i lose what sanity is left of me. the way you looked as i walked away was the most gorgeous thing ive ever seen....then i closed the door and walked out. what does all this mean? i dont know but you show me how much of a loser i can be and yet i just agree.
2006-06-25 21:12:44 · 34 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
wow.
2006-06-25 21:16:13 · answer #1 · answered by g'day 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
4
2006-06-26 01:16:47 · answer #2 · answered by charleedude 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2006-06-25 21:49:13 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2006-06-25 21:17:27 · answer #4 · answered by David V 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2006-06-25 21:16:02 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
6
2006-06-25 21:15:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
6
2006-06-25 21:15:01 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
8
2006-06-26 05:29:34 · answer #8 · answered by サマンサ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8
2006-06-26 01:41:35 · answer #9 · answered by doglady 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7/10
kind of kitsi, "i deserve every punch youve thrown with your pretty lips" i mean really? thats kinda boy band...
in the end you wrote "and yet i just agree" why yet? i think you should take the "yet" out.
"words i cant repeat unless i lose what sanity left in me" pretty good...
2006-06-26 00:09:00 · answer #10 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
quite good... give it an 8
i wrote this one too, care to read it?
you just stand there and watch the tears fall out of my eyes while i'm struggling to get free from deceit and lies. treated like trash, thrown away like dirt, you stuck the needle just where it hurt. took it and stomped all over my heart, dont you realise its tearing ME apart? i will heal, time will tell. As for you, i wish you'd rot in hell.
lol, ^ this one ^ wasnt that good... there are a lot better ones. just picked this one out randomly!
2006-06-25 21:24:23 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋