What do you think of these poems as well??
I said goodbye to him, the day he left me
I told him I loved him, the day he left me
I told him he was never to be forgotten,the day he left me
I said goodbye to him the day he died.
this friend is full of pain
this friend is in need of despirate help
this friend doesnt understand how good he has it
this friend thinks everyone hates him
this is a friend in need of despirate help
this friend has asked me for help
i tell him to stop looking for love in the dark because he will never find it
this is a friend who is uptight
i simply tell this friend who is in need of despirate help
open your eyes and see the light
2006-06-25 15:04:13 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
yes i know they dont have 2 rhyme
2006-06-25 15:10:13 · update #1
not bad ,yes I'm weeping
2006-06-25 15:17:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Very nice. You know that poetry does not have to rhyme every time. I hope you continue, these are good for obviously a young person.
2006-06-25 22:09:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very simple i tell you
Very simple indeed
Very much in need of some depth
I'm gonna go cry now
2006-06-25 22:10:13 · answer #3 · answered by Indigo7 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
interesting
2006-06-25 22:07:28 · answer #4 · answered by Missi J 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good keep writting
2006-06-25 22:18:20 · answer #5 · answered by BIG MOMMA 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good
2006-06-25 22:16:55 · answer #6 · answered by Metal 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very deep.
2006-06-25 22:08:55 · answer #7 · answered by late_sleeper35 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
now i'm really depressed.
2006-06-25 22:08:29 · answer #8 · answered by it's not sexy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋