What do you think?

Question

What do you Think of this poem?

Afraid of life
Afraid of death
there is no way out
you just have to face it
throw away all the scars
and take away the pain
life is like a rose
if you keep it watered it lives and grows to be strong
if you leeve it lonley then your just leaving it to die
do not be afraid of the past for the past is past
be worried about your future
you can not change the past but you can change everything you do now
you can change the person whom is standing right in front of you now at this very moment
but there is just this one thing i have to ask you
are you afraid?

thank you for all the nice comments.......I love to write poems

Answer 1

Afraid of what. Facing the truth? or facing life. I am not afraid of none of them. As you said if one is strong enough one can face everything.

Answer 2

Well, it's OK. But you need to use spell check before you submit it anywhere.
There are a few really good lines and some that could use shortening. Like if you keep it watered it lives and grows to be strong - Could be changed to if you keep it water it grows to be strong. if it grows then obviously it lives. there are a few other place where there is redundancy in what you are saying, but it's OK if it's meant to be that way.
Just my opinion, But it really shows promise.

Answer 3

AwEsOmE <3

Answer 4

Good job

Answer 5

It's alright.

Answer 6

wow! did you write that? it's beautiful!!!! and so true! You should be a writer!!!!

Answer 7

okay interesting

Answer 8

its great.