Hayley the strange!
By: Hayley McPickle
Hayley McPickle was a very strange girl
And she lived in a very strange world
Everyone was nice
But they were afraid of mice
And you couldn’t go anywhere without slipping on ice
If you lived in her world, you were glad
And nothing, not anything, could make you sad
But then something happened that made Hayley frown
A lion named Vandoogelstein walked into to town
And he attacked their number one clown
The villagers were close to being sad
But Hayley was very mad
So she decided their was something that needed to be done
And until it happened she would not have fun
So she got the sheriff to come and help her
And together they would stop the clown from being Vandoogelstein’s supper
They arrived at Vandoogelsteins house
And both were as sneaky as a mouse
Hayley went in and grabbed the clown
And then her frown was turned upside down
She kicked out the lion
And everyone stopped their cryin’
Hayley McPickle had a few meetings to attend
What else can I say, that is the end.
2006-06-25 12:39:33 · 10 answers · asked by Hayley 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Cute, silly little rhyme for children, would be great illustrated and in book form. Good luck with this. Keep with the childrens writing.
2006-06-25 12:58:25 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
About average, if you like poems and song lyrics that tell storys then check out "A poem on the underground wall" by Simon & Garfunkel.
http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/poems/119.html
2006-06-25 19:44:43 · answer #2 · answered by MARTIN B 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That would make a great children's book!
I can't wait to see it!
If you need some help with illustrations, I would love to help you!
2006-06-25 19:43:16 · answer #3 · answered by sharrron 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good, very creative! i think you have a lot of potential as a writer.
2006-06-25 19:51:00 · answer #4 · answered by native 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very good
2006-06-25 19:44:56 · answer #5 · answered by Judas Rabbi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
like an adult version of doctor suess
2006-06-25 19:43:29 · answer #6 · answered by hollabak_at_me 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds cute and funny.
2006-06-25 19:43:13 · answer #7 · answered by cyndi_035 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sound awesome and ryhmee
2006-06-25 19:46:11 · answer #8 · answered by cyan 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats really cute...
2006-06-25 20:02:27 · answer #9 · answered by Lilmisssassy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
idk if its a poem or a song but it sounds great if it was either one
2006-06-25 19:41:26 · answer #10 · answered by biggprincejb9 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋