How can i finish this poem?
~Masque~
Everyone wears a mask at some point in there life.
Some grow out of it.
Some grow into it.
And some,
Never take it off.
To shield yourself is not wrong.
Self preservation is a must in life.
But we should not disguise who we are.
To obscure the character of our being,
Is at the very least…
Heartbreaking.
If you won’t think of the shallowness you bring onto yourself.
Consider the lies you tell your acquaintances.
2006-06-25 02:31:44 · 7 answers · asked by ? 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I think it's done at "heartbreaking"
2006-06-25 02:35:24 · answer #1 · answered by Tavita 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Then live those lies and shun the consequenses,
Caused to those friends,
Then die alone, with noone by your side,
Leaving nothing that tells you were ever here.
(I love yours, hope my contribution does not spoil your train of thought),
2006-06-25 09:47:15 · answer #2 · answered by thomasrobinsonantonio 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For your life is a fa sod, a fake image of what you believe.
Do you really exist?
2006-06-25 09:38:43 · answer #3 · answered by Handsup 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poem is ok but it doen't seem to flow go to rhyme.com and that site should help you with words
2006-06-25 09:43:07 · answer #4 · answered by jk poet 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You might want to rethink whether you really want to finish this.
2006-06-25 09:35:16 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Solicit opinions from total strangers"
2006-06-25 09:34:58 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
OK ILOVE YOU GOOD NIGHT BOO BOO
2006-06-25 09:35:15 · answer #7 · answered by Lol4 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋