They wanna talk sh!t but they ain't takin a step/ i'll leave a hoe on her back/ Then im building my rep/ word spread/ raising cred./ bowing down instead/leave dem b!tches on they knees like im gettin some head/OG keys but ain't holding no grudge/ cause they knowing they dead wrong/ dem b!ches want budge/cause they knowing they'll get stomped/ Gurl plz/ kno I get some mo/ betta get yo man when i hit da low cause when his ***** leave/ is when I hit da dow/ cause ima drop dat sh!t like Jackie-o/ play it slow/ cause im pimpin da ish/ makin ni99as pull ova like da baddest chick
I just started rappin can you tell me how I did or you can just rate it from 1-10.......
2006-06-24 15:13:55 · 5 answers · asked by lady_stunna9202 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
O and im 14
2006-06-24 15:26:50 · update #1
Gurl dat ish iz hot ........real talk u iz gud I been tryin 2 get into tha rap thang but I just cant get it ..........iz alot work.......lik u gotta be dedicated or sumthin but u real gud 4 a starter
2006-06-24 15:30:57 · answer #1 · answered by oso_cute010 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
not too bad
BUT
you're 14 ... so you shouldnt be using some of the words you do in your raps.
2006-06-25 13:07:59 · answer #2 · answered by Mj 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
-10 rap is crap you should sing in a rock band instead
2006-06-25 04:59:00 · answer #3 · answered by deathdealer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you need more work, but not bad.
i rate you about 4.5
2006-06-24 22:17:30 · answer #4 · answered by _ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sdgtf
2006-06-24 22:15:37 · answer #5 · answered by on theWaves 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋