some more poetry id like to be judged?

Question

Baby from a Haunted Womb:

Listen to the baby crying for his dear sweet mother
begging for warm milk from no other
Listen to the infant counting his last hours
his breaths sway and his taste grows sour
Listen to the aborted child screaming for attention from your lips,
he's dying slowly grasping at your hips
Listen to the ghost that haunts your womb
live in shadows and agony, you walking tomb


could you guess it was about abortion, i think its obvious, what did you think?

its supposed to be a pro life poem, if u dont like it ur a comi, i believe abortion is wrong, thats why i wrote this poem

uh, yellow rose, nice to use logic and reality to kill my words, its not meaning literally. u robot!

Answer 1

I DON'T BE LIVE IN ABORTION EITHER BUT I DO FEEL A WOMEN HAS THE RIGHT TO DO WITH HER OWN BODY. AN THE POEM IS NOT BAD.

Answer 2

i don't like that at all