can u give me your opinions on my poetry?

Question

Your:

your presence is to treasure
your kisses of love are to pleasure
your eyes are the jewels in my hands
your legs are the pillars to exalt your beauty
your hair is divine, stringing thru my hands
your skin is a coat of coulor to lust
your mind is special, one i can trust
your breast are incredible and delicious
your jealousy can be large and viscious
your feet are sweet, they carry your body
yourhands are mine, they lift my sorrows
your love is undescribable but i can say its mine
your waist fits my hands around it
your seducing thighs numb whenever you sit
your mine and i am yours to live for
your soul is mine to lust for and to adore
your ears hear my words of admiration
your arms warm my skin with inspiration
your spirit is like no others
your face, all in all, is warm in my hands
you're my one and only who at youth i've met
you're someone to worship, with you i have not one regret

im posting my poetry to see if it should be insulted or not, bcuz i want to be a poet, maybe not for occupation but right now its just my hobby, most of em i dont like, but my ex girlfriend loved this one

Answer 1

I like it u keep working thats good!

Answer 2

Unfortunately generic. Sounds like you wrote it to impress a girl. Good for you if it worked on her! Keep at it and develop your own style.

Answer 3

i think its good

Answer 4

are you looking at porn while reading this ????????///