This is what I got so far on my resume as my objective:
" Expand knowledge of Insurance programs and acquire experience on the field of insurance. "
It makes no sence whatsoever... What Can I do to improve?
2006-06-24 09:06:57 · 13 answers · asked by unlargocaminoalcielo 2 in Business & Finance ➔ Careers & Employment
Well, first of all, I would say "in the field of insurance" not "on the field..." If it's any comfort, I don't think that resume objectives are supposed to make a whole lot of sense, and I think yours is about as sensical as they come. You might want to consider adding something about what *you* can contribute to the company. Do you have any previous experience? If not, I'd just stick to what you have. Resumes are a pain to write but it sounds like you're doing better than you think.
Also, to the person who answered your question by calling you an idiot: Don't be so bloody rude. This person is asking a good, valid question and "idiot" is all you can come up with? Go fling sand on the playground and keep your nasty answers out of Yahoo!
2006-06-24 09:13:18 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Continue to expand my knowledge of insurance related programs and software packages while gaining experience in the insurance industry. Just a thought.
2006-06-24 09:14:33 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
put for your objective
"Expand my knowledge of the insurance field and acquire necessary experience to do so using various insurance programs"
or
"Obtain an Insurance position related to the knowledge I have acquired through the use of various insurance training programs"
2006-06-24 09:13:19 · answer #3 · answered by C. D 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
" Expand my knowledge of Insurance programs and acquire experience in the insurance field. "
2006-06-24 09:11:47 · answer #4 · answered by ☼Jims Brain☼ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Expand my knowledge of multiple insurance programs while acquiring more experience I can use to further my career in the insurance industry.
2006-06-24 09:11:33 · answer #5 · answered by dublecrossed86 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Expand knowledge of insurance programs and acquire experience in the field.
2006-06-24 09:09:48 · answer #6 · answered by koifishlady 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it's a good objective..maybe twist the words a little...
I would like to acquire experience and program knowledge in the insurance field.
I don't really get what the programming is for insurance..though..maybe you could just leave that out, or put it in somewhere else. more like, you have computer experience.
2006-06-24 09:12:30 · answer #7 · answered by Sweety 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Putting an objective on a resume is obsolete. That went out with the 80's
2006-06-24 09:09:52 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would emphasize what you can do for THEM (the company), rather than what you want them to do for YOU. Right now, it sounds like your objective in getting a job is to get more knowledge and experience. Most companies want to know that you can offer them something because of your knowledge and experience. Can you put as your objective something that shows the company what you want to do for them?
2006-06-24 09:12:28 · answer #9 · answered by ABBMAMA 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about "To further my career in the field of insurance"
2006-06-24 09:09:49 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋