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Liar
You are gone
Gone forever
And I know you’re
Never coming back
You told me this would
Never happen
You lied to me
You’re a liar
You left me here
Right when I need you

1. I need the lord to help me now!
Oh why did you have to…?
Have to …. Be gone?

2. I know you didn’t mean to lie
But can’t you come back
I miss you
I miss you!!

2006-06-24 02:52:14 · 7 answers · asked by Hot Girl_94 1 in Entertainment & Music Music

7 answers

i loveit! im a person who really loves everything about love.. love quotes, love poems, love songs.. i dont care if it's sad or happy love.. as long as it's about love! you're good in making poems.. i cant make one so you're grade is 100% for me..!!!

2006-06-24 02:58:04 · answer #1 · answered by g25_19_21p 5 · 4 0

Um yeah it was alright if it had music With it, it would have been good

2006-06-24 10:25:03 · answer #2 · answered by *333Half-Evil* 4 · 0 0

weird. doesn't have much meaning in it. it needs a lot more explaining and it's too short too. plus lyrics aren't everything, it's only a part. sorry but i didn't really like this. try working on it and we'll see.

2006-06-24 10:08:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

you have the words lie and liar in there too much but other than that it could be okay.

2006-06-24 10:02:31 · answer #4 · answered by charmed_ones_lover 4 · 0 0

Yuk!

2006-06-24 09:55:38 · answer #5 · answered by kalabalu 5 · 0 0

wat's the theme of this song? any way no sense

2006-06-24 09:55:46 · answer #6 · answered by sweety 1 · 0 0

it started out good.......

2006-06-24 09:57:34 · answer #7 · answered by Coodles 5 · 0 0

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