There are tense problems with both. Have is progressive while improved is past.
My edit would be:
I had no idea what they improved until I read the little tiny footnote on the bottom right corner.
2006-06-23 20:31:39
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answer #1
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answered by Will the Thrill 5
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1 I had no idea what they had improved until I read the tiny footnote on the right bottom corner.
2006-06-24 17:00:59
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answer #2
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answered by mica 1
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1. I had no idea what they had improved, that is, not until I had read the tiny little footnote in the right bottom corner.
2. I had no idea what they had improved until I had read the tiny little footnote in the right bottom corner.
Actually, you can omit the word "little".
2006-06-24 05:51:32
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answered by Mysterious 3
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There is a grammatical error in both sentences but i've understood your question. The answer should be: I had no idea what they had improved until I read the little, tiny footnote on the bottom right corner.Or it could also be: I will have no idea what they have improved until I read the little, tiny footnote on the bottom right corner. The1st one is in past tense & the 2nd one is in the future tense. u could choose whichever u like depending on which tense the rest of the paragraph is like or u could choose whichever sounds better to u.
2006-06-24 05:31:27
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answered by Mimi 2
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Use this.
3- I have no idea what they have improved until i read the little, tiny footnote on the right bottom corner.
or
4- I have no idea what they had had improved until i read the little, tiny footnote on the right bottom corner.
:)
Good luck.
2006-06-24 03:29:35
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answer #5
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answered by Pistaccio 4
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I have no idea to what has been improved, not until I read the small print on the right side of the footnote.
(the footnote is always on the bottom, you shouldnt need to specify this)
or
I have no idea what they have improved until I read the what it says on the right side of the footnote.
2006-06-24 03:57:11
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answer #6
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answered by having_a_blonde_day_lol 4
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i do not have any idea what they have improved until i read the small footnote located at the right bottom corner
2006-06-24 03:54:08
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answered by zest for life 2
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I hadn't had any ideas what they had improved until I read the footnote in the right bottom corner.
I think.
I'd use past perfect in this structure , or the 'no sooner ... than...'structure.
2006-06-24 03:30:15
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answer #8
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answered by eDiNa 2
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2what they have
2006-06-24 03:28:35
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answered by stloa 2
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