It's all worth it?

Question

A cloud has passed over my life
Suddenly, the weather is bad
I cannot longer see or understand
I feel like I've lost the will to fight

Will you allow me to pick up,
what's left of my heart?
Should I pull myself together now,
or fall apart?

Inside myself I must look
for an ounce of strenght to move on
the fight does not end with this fall
another chance might be around

Should I continue along this path?
It's rocky and messy, but it feels right
How couldn't this path be the perfect one?
It ends, after all, in your puppy-dog eyes

Words are empty and souless,
they are not enough to express my love
burning inside, losing my mind
I just want to be by your side

I will take you to where birds fly by
show you my dreams, and hold your hand
If you ask me to do it, I will get the stars
Bring you their light, and we both shall shine

Until you I could not comprehend,
the terms "soul mate" and "fate"
You brought pain and joy to my dark world
Made me feel alive with your beautiful soul

Answer 1

2 points lol

Answer 2

I will answer you via Poe from the stand point of the other side:
ALONE
From childhood's earliest hour I have not been
As others were--I have not seen
As others saw--I could not bring
My passions from a common spring--
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow--I could not awaken
Myheart to joy at the same tone-
And all I have lov'd--I lov'd alone--
Then--in my childhood--in the dawn
Of a most stormy life--was drawn
From ev'ry depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still--
From the torrent, or the fountain--
From the red cliff of the mountain--
From the sun that 'round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold--
From the lightning in the sky
As it pass'd me flying by--
From the thunder, and the storm--
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of demon in my view--
E.A. Poe

Answer 3

I believe you are a romantic and sensitve young man burning with the passions and pains of flaming desire and hormones, and why not if you have never been a fool for love you've not truly lived, pheramones have done their wondrous work but it does not stand at all when lovely Luzette3 brought out the E.A. P. O. E. I hope you see the difference between the work of you and he. Mixed metaphores not complimentary with meter and ryhme running ,then limping out of time. Don't be sad , many a lover's beastial heart goes mad , singing,howling at full moon not aware he's so so loud and out of tune.

Answer 4

You are a very gifted poet with alot of soul & feeling. Some of the best poetry comes from the heart, where yours obviously did.You sound a bit like your somewhat depressed. But,then some of the best painters & poets usually are.Keep up your good work!! Did you ever think of going to a poetry slam with your work???

Answer 5

You are a gifted person. But you're obviously young, and you need to get passed your programmed thinking that your happiness depends on other people and circumstances. Good luck with your venture in life!

Answer 6

What exactly are you afraid the government is going to do to you. If you aren't a criminal or a terrorist there is nothing these programs can do to violate your liberty's. Please, don't be so rude to people on here because you don't agree with them. Have an open mind and stop taking your cozy freedom for granted.

Answer 7

It's a beautiful poem but that relationship really messed with your head, don't worry another relationship is waiting for you right around the corner.

Answer 8

nice fairy tale but nothing more ..one cloud passes over and another one is right behind it...it's an ok poem but there are no soul mates or happy ever after...sorry kids it's all make-believe

Answer 9

That's deep and if any one says anything negative then they didn't get the meaning behind this lovely poem

Answer 10

aww thats so cute <33