I miss childhood
everything went so good
i don't know what to do now
back then everything was effortless
but now everything ends up a big huge mess
At first i thought everything was bad
but was i stupid cuz eveything was grand
chorus: comparing now and then
i see i took everything for grantid
now i could careless about that damn stupid dress. nothing will be the same
im sorry for the sadness,the many wasted tears
they'd sure come in handy with all my new fears nothing will be the same
its not done yet but tell me wut u think of it so far
2006-06-22 14:54:37 · 10 answers · asked by kris10_xo 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
it sounds pretty good!! youre creative--I could never do something like that--and your lyrics are soo true!! :) keep it up you are doing great!
good job!
2006-06-22 15:00:02 · answer #1 · answered by ▲▼▲▼ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good concept. The lyrics themselves are a bit trite. Every piece of work, though, is a work in progress. Keep trying to make it better!
2006-06-22 15:57:46 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not so great, but keep trying. Work on the rhyming parts esp. You rhymed bad with grand?
2006-06-22 15:00:33 · answer #3 · answered by Pumpkin Head 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a very good song, and it's so true. Good luck with the rest of the song...and your writing career!!
2006-06-22 15:00:14 · answer #4 · answered by Ms. Williams 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The song is OK.Not the best but it's good
2006-06-22 14:59:42 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hope the tune is good to support it
2006-06-22 15:01:13 · answer #6 · answered by kalabalu 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it needs work, dont get me wrong you have talent but the song does not flow easily. it needs to have a better hook also
2006-06-22 15:00:50 · answer #7 · answered by native 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! post it all of it after you've wrotten all! hope to read it soon!
2006-06-22 15:15:00 · answer #8 · answered by ~Chelly~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad, could be longer
2006-06-22 15:00:19 · answer #9 · answered by weezer1897 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good.
2006-06-22 14:59:10 · answer #10 · answered by Ginnykitty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋