Which is the most erotic of these two poems?

Question

A males sexual oddessy
at
http://www.angelfire.com/poetry/gamahuch/mso.html
or A females sexual oddessy
at
http://www.angelfire.com/poetry/gamahuch/xanadu.html

Answer 1

Neither one - both from a grammatical point of view (when comparing two, use more/less, not "most") or from an aesthetic point of view (lose the "doths", the extreme self-pity, and the E.A. Poe imagery/vocabulary - it worked for him, but not for you.)

Answer 2

too darn wordy and lengthy to be erotic