Though dripping roses and tattered hearts
Stand alone as the vengance starts
With forgotten memories and broken dreams
No vision held is what it seems
While an eternity locked within myself
Has driven my soul to the grave
An eternity spent without love
Has made me no more than a slave
The dream kept me going for many years
Giving me strength to hold back the tears
The tears of emptyness and thoughts of pain
As my world turns to hatred
I drive me insane
2006-06-22 05:12:10 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I wrote it
2006-06-22 05:26:05 · update #1
I've been in that place before... You have talent, I think that's really good... Have you written a lot?? If your looking for a place that you can post poetry, try www.poems-and-quotes.com
2006-06-22 06:27:21 · answer #1 · answered by Leonor 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dude, YOU CAN WRITE!
I know what you are feeling, was there for a long time myself.
This can be used as therapy for your heart, because your words justoved me to tears. Don't stop writing.
2006-06-22 08:58:54 · answer #2 · answered by lovethebeanie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I used to relate and it takes a huge effect on my relationship now!
2006-06-22 05:19:00 · answer #3 · answered by blondieinlove 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's really good. I can kind of relate to it, but no matter what, I think you need to keep writing, because that poem was really good.
2006-06-22 11:48:54 · answer #4 · answered by Washed Up Top Soil 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I absolutely can. Who wrote it?
2006-06-22 05:16:25 · answer #5 · answered by Shqiptare 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yep but yet nobody else sees it
2006-06-22 05:16:31 · answer #6 · answered by lain_envy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Some of it, sometimes.
2006-06-22 06:14:17 · answer #7 · answered by keri gee 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Unfortunately I do...
Sad isn't it?
2006-06-22 05:16:15 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no i have jesus
2006-06-22 05:20:12 · answer #9 · answered by jojo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋