Hi,
Lets all set a record for most answers!!
The more replies to this then the better, thanks!!
Here is another song I have made, can I have some opinions?
FATE
Established in the hands of fate
Full of anger in the place of hate
Passed the final hurdle that held me back
Now that I'm running can't lost track
Sprung back from legitimacy
Warped out of reality
Danger is light speed in front of me
I'm about to become another martyr
Bitter against my enemies
Vengeful for retribution that will be had
The deciet and lies mount high
Been betrayed by those that I prized
Got to get my last breath out
Say these words before I'm gone
Wondering where I went wrong
Forced into slavery fate has been my adversary
This song is about being betrayed by those that I thought were trustworty... it is about been stuck in one path and not having the power to stand on your own to feet and be counted!!
2006-06-21 08:36:14 · 38 answers · asked by East Bay Punk 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Hi,
Opps I've spelt some words wrong!!
Anyway keep trying for a record people!!
God bless ya all!!!!
2006-06-21 08:44:57 · update #1
SNOOP DOG wants to talk to you yes this is great!!!!!!
http://www.talentrock.com
http://www.starnow.com ~~~~~Musician wanted go for it
2006-06-21 08:41:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 5⤋
Hi there. Nice lyrics. A bit angsty for my liking. What sort of music r u into? Rap, Metal ? Is that you in the pic? U look hot !!! Keep up the good work
2006-06-21 09:28:53 · answer #2 · answered by Scorpius 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You seem to have talent, but some of the words aren't the right ones....keep trying to find that perfect song, but remember it may take a while.
God bless and good luck
2006-06-21 08:42:31 · answer #3 · answered by inlovew/jesus 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
um the song is good but i really dont see this getting more than like the thousands the featured ones sorry dude
2006-06-21 08:53:00 · answer #4 · answered by ffeJ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
okay cool, have u never tried to get a record deal cause u always leave a song on here??
2006-06-21 08:41:34 · answer #5 · answered by sum1special 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you should keep writing songs. And if you look as good in real life as you do in your pic, I think you should perform them too. Can you sing?
Go for it!!
2006-06-21 08:46:56 · answer #6 · answered by Suzita 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i do not like hate...you chose the best outlet anyway...not too bad but a few stretches on trying to rhyme yet stay with your subject...i'd give it a "7"
2006-06-21 08:41:54 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here you go. Good lyrics, and you are cute (I am sure you know that though) so you should definitely go far in whatever it is you want to do, good luck!
2006-06-22 00:54:02 · answer #8 · answered by complex_bear 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Can't really say if I like it without knowing the tune.
2006-06-21 10:38:25 · answer #9 · answered by Dellajoy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good ive been in the same situation b4 and it hurts alot but life goes on
2006-06-21 08:43:03 · answer #10 · answered by christina t 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
just stopped by to answer. Dont think you're gonna make the record though, sorry, but good luck. Thanks for the 2 points.
2006-06-22 15:00:25 · answer #11 · answered by Becky 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋