Broken heart,
Love forsaken.
Now apart,
Love taken.
No love,
Just me.
No dove,
No we.
Come back,
To me.
I lack,
Without thee.
Without you,
I cry.
I'm through,
asking why.
2006-06-20 10:01:40 · 7 answers · asked by Sammy Hagar 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
This is the absolute best one you've written so far. It's heart wrenching and yet simple in form. I applaud your efforts.....
Here's one from me,I'll write it now as I always do, from my mind and feelings........(itsimpossible)
Your words tore me apart,
They went straight to my heart.
I know what you feel,
All of it is so real.
Love hurts like nothing can
Why we try is the question.
Don't give up the quest just yet,
Perhaps you will win, don't fret.
Hopeless days and endless nights,
Constant heartache full of fright.
Of losing out to someone who,
You know is not for you.
Falling apart day by day,
Wish there was a way,
To have the one you love right now,
Never to end forever the vow.
Love one another as soulmates do,
Always and forever to be true........
So what do you think.......
2006-06-20 12:56:45 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's nice.
2006-06-20 17:21:14 · answer #2 · answered by LOVE2LD 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is pretty awesome, Good work!
2006-06-20 17:05:28 · answer #3 · answered by hannahonelove 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwwwwww!! Dat's tight!It made me cry!
2006-06-20 17:04:42 · answer #4 · answered by Latina Chick 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that's deep.
2006-06-20 17:04:45 · answer #5 · answered by eehco 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't know what to think.
2006-06-20 17:05:16 · answer #6 · answered by daljack -a girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Will !! ok.
2006-06-20 17:11:18 · answer #7 · answered by Nick 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋