this is older, but i like some of the things i say...
the warmest winter is passing through while snow melts on impact. the air of spring is pushing cold bitter nights away and i can see the sun in the night sky burning and drying all of these tears. morning is finally on its way opening my eyes from my nightmare and mourning is kissing me goodbye for the last time. hope's lips are the threshold sweet upon my cheek welcoming me to my eyes visioning nothing but the best because the worst is only history............
2006-06-19 18:28:59 · 23 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That was really nice!
2006-06-19 18:33:16 · answer #1 · answered by Apple 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
10
2006-06-21 14:07:29 · answer #2 · answered by preciousmoments1962 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2006-06-19 18:32:31 · answer #3 · answered by raven 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
2
2006-06-19 18:32:19 · answer #4 · answered by Maloy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2006-06-19 18:30:42 · answer #5 · answered by Jesika G 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9
2006-06-20 01:48:56 · answer #6 · answered by doglady 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9
2006-06-19 18:32:07 · answer #7 · answered by calpal2001 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10! specially "spring is pushing cold bitter nights away and i can see the sun in the night sky burning and drying all of these tears." You really must be heart broken
2006-06-19 18:41:07 · answer #8 · answered by crazyrandom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice -- you wrote this?
Add proper punctuation and use of capital letters and it's a 10.
Remember, if your readers can't follow your format, they will lose the content.
2006-06-19 18:32:32 · answer #9 · answered by rmarlena 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9
that paints a beautiful picture! you should be proud of yourself.
love this part:
"hope's lips are the threshold sweet upon my cheek"
2006-06-19 18:37:44 · answer #10 · answered by Jennifer H 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that is really deep. Excellent though. I give you a 9 (try to eliminate saying "and" so much) Good Job!!
2006-06-19 18:33:42 · answer #11 · answered by lovingarmywife 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋