ANOTHER poetic style thingy....
with one hand in yours and the other tracing the surface of that of a dream, i consider it real when lips kiss back this time and breath is new on my face. driven closer to my body, my hands shudder (not used to holding angels) but im learning with each of your heart on my chest. i can hear the melody as im cast away in your eyes ballet. sing me to sleep and hold me there.
2006-06-19 17:32:41 · 9 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
no not really its a big bunch of hippie crap if u ask me
2006-06-19 17:36:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd kind of look at you cross-eyed from across the poker table and say "ok knock off the bullshit...ya going to call or what?"
2006-06-20 00:37:16 · answer #2 · answered by figaro1912 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that would be sweet but this is 2006, not bc 200
2006-06-20 16:05:12 · answer #3 · answered by its ME !!! 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah i love poetry but only if its tru and from the heart
2006-06-20 00:38:41 · answer #4 · answered by Jen_hobbles 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love poetry and I think it's nice.
2006-06-20 00:42:41 · answer #5 · answered by Nico 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd like it even better if it had music to go with it
2006-06-20 00:38:28 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's sweet, very nice
2006-06-20 00:37:21 · answer #7 · answered by Carrie D 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG!!! Definitely!!! That's amazing!!!
2006-06-20 01:28:23 · answer #8 · answered by crazyrandom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
definately!!!!!
( ur a wonderful poet!!)
2006-06-20 01:08:27 · answer #9 · answered by Lira 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋