you've got nothing to copy, i didn't even bother reading past the 3rd line it' that bad !
2006-06-19 14:09:31
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answered by The Hit Man 6
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Rap is such a superficial genre that lyrics no longer matter. Honestly, I don't like your lyrics, but they are right on par with all other mainstream "artists'" (I refuse to call them "artists") The ever growing shallowness of the public has made so called "rappers" into mere outlets for further stereotyping, since, let's all be honest, "rappers" are generally black, and associated with the "street life". As long as you have the basic "triplet beat" or even simpler "quarter, quarter, eighth, eighth" pattern, integrated, all you need to do is make sure the general public finds it acceptable, and then the rest of the herd will be wooed over. If you don't know what I'm talking about, please, study music, for I hate how none of the so-called modern "artists" know nothing of music.
2006-06-19 21:23:31
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answered by Anonymous
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this sounds more like R&B than rap. forget the song writing and get a job.
2006-06-19 21:14:37
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answered by Einstein 5
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Well - you asked ... thumbs down. I don't think you need to worry about anyone stealing your rap. Sorry.
2006-06-19 21:10:47
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answered by monkeymom 5
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that was weird but u should ask one of your friends...if they aren't all gone after the second line...rap sucks
2006-06-19 21:12:08
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answered by livelife2luvNbLuved12345 2
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ummm not so great but the cake part was funny
2006-06-19 21:09:33
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answered by jacksonx30 2
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I hate rap.
2006-06-19 21:09:49
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answered by ? 5
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You are a moron.....get a job and a life
2006-06-19 21:07:39
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answered by Anonymous
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give up homeboy, write country and western.
2006-06-19 21:08:26
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answered by wandering_canuck 5
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It doesnt have rhythm
2006-06-19 21:09:17
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answered by SuNsHiNe 2
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