plz read it if you havent then ansa!! im soo scared:
ON MY MIND
I can't stop thinking about you,
You are always there,
In my mind and in my dreams,
I always seem to stare.
I never concentrate properly,
Because I notice you,
You have a way of making me,
See only the things you do.
I love the way you smile,
It makes me feel all warm inside,
To be there next to you,
Makes me want to hide.
I love your personality,
It is what makes you shine,
And how I pray so much to God,
That you would just be mine.
I love the way you act tough,
Thinking you are cool,
I love the way you do your hair,
Everyday to school.
If I was to see you,
Sitting all alone,
I would want to go and hug you,
Till the day is gone.
If I was to see you,
Begin to cry,
I would feel so down,
My mouth will feel so dry.
I can't stand seeing you,
With another girl,
It just makes me feel so low,
And I begin to curl.
My world will crash down,
If you are not there,
Without you I am nothing,
It feels like you don’t care.
I really need you in my life,
I want to be more than friends,
I want to share my life with you,
A love that never ends!!
2006-06-18 21:19:25 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
no i have a ton of poems that i wrote about girls, soon you will find another person and write something about them, just keep them to yourself it makes things easier.
2006-06-18 21:23:55 · answer #1 · answered by deathdealer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i have to give it to you, you must of really thought about this when you wrote it. it has a lot of feelings in it.
i think you need to be friends with this fellow first, then let things happen naturally, before you give this poem to him. i can tell you really like this guy, but make sure he likes you first before you give it to him.
high school crushes are horrible, if you give a poem with this much meaning and the crusher don't like you. i have been there many moons ago, and i am sure high school crushes are still the same today as they were over 25 years ago.
take it slow, don't hurry, good luck with your decision.
2006-06-19 04:31:42 · answer #2 · answered by sister cool breeze 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is very nice.Only you can decide weather or not to give it to him.I have many poems I'll probably never show to anyone.Sometimes its just good for you to get your feelings out.
Keep writing....its very healing even if you just keep them to yourself.Good Luck!
2006-06-19 04:25:55 · answer #3 · answered by bamahotT 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why not? What is the worst that could happen. They will either like it and like you, not really like it and say they do because they like you, or they won't like it and will think you are a weirdo. No matter what happens, at least you'll know.
2006-06-19 04:24:14 · answer #4 · answered by david s 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honey, don't quit your 5-9 yet. I give you a 7.
2006-06-19 21:22:13 · answer #5 · answered by Karlao 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If that is the only and best way u can express ya feelings then give it to him
2006-06-19 04:23:35 · answer #6 · answered by Young boi 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg you really like him, if you are ready to show him your poem, think you are telling him you love him .. etc .. he will know your feelings for him.. so be ready for an answer
i like it , a little chessy but you need to edit...
good luck!
2006-06-19 04:29:01 · answer #7 · answered by Fatima 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good
2006-06-19 04:38:15 · answer #8 · answered by Lalit D 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh its realy lovely...........
amazing... but needs bit edit.... work on it a bit
2006-06-19 04:22:33 · answer #9 · answered by krishsag@gamil.com 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no
2006-06-19 04:22:04 · answer #10 · answered by roseanne g 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋