ON MY MIND
I can't stop thinking about you,
You are always there,
In my mind and in my dreams,
I always seem to stare.
I never concentrate properly,
Because I notice you,
You have a way of making me,
See only the things you do.
I love the way you smile,
It makes me feel all warm inside,
To be there next to you,
Makes me want to hide.
I love your personality,
It is what makes you shine,
And how I pray so much to God,
That you would just be mine.
I love the way you act tough,
Thinking you are cool,
I love the way you do your hair,
Everyday to school.
If I was to see you,
Sitting all alone,
I would want to go and hug you,
Till the day is gone.
If I was to see you,
Begin to cry,
I would feel so down,
My mouth will feel so dry.
I can't stand seeing you,
With another girl,
It just makes me feel so low,
And I begin to curl.
My world will crash down,
If you are not there,
Without you I am nothing,
It feels like you don’t care.
I really need you in my life,
I want to be more than friends,
I want to share my life with you,
A love that never ends!!
2006-06-18 21:00:09 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
do you think i should be a poet?
2006-06-18 21:13:52 · update #1
or maybe a songwritter i have written many songs- im only 13!!
2006-06-18 21:14:29 · update #2
This is a great poem. I have published 2 so far and I think that you should work on it a little though. But it is great
2006-06-18 21:08:24 · answer #1 · answered by garo_babahekian 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a great poem. I have published 2 so far and I think that you should work on it a little though. But it is great.
2006-06-19 04:04:50 · answer #2 · answered by david_pugsley 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its very good. Show it to the person you really wrote this one for.
2006-06-19 04:05:11 · answer #3 · answered by Whatever 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good, I like it.
2006-06-19 04:07:49 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it
2006-06-19 04:04:30 · answer #5 · answered by Krn 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
VERY VERY NICE! He'll fall head over heals for you. ;)
2006-06-19 04:03:30 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you have potential ... keep writing
2006-06-19 04:30:14 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its aight
2006-06-19 04:27:41 · answer #8 · answered by i_love_orange_crush_05 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it!!
2006-06-19 04:05:18 · answer #9 · answered by glamourgirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's cute.
2006-06-19 04:07:07 · answer #10 · answered by Rachel H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋