I look at the sea,
As I look out I wonder.
Is there a beauty for me,
Somewhere out there.
I head back home,
And stare into the fire.
As I stare, I desire,
For a beauty so fare.
The very next day,
I went for a walk.
As I rounded the block,
I noticed her.
She was the most beautiful girl,
Than I had ever laid eyes on.
She was a beautiful swan,
In a pond full of ducks.
I journeyed over to her,
And asked her name.
Out of her came,
The name Bianca.
Oh, Bianca,
What a name.
She is clearly not the same,
As any other girl.
It was love,
Love at first sight.
Bianca is my light,
In a sea of darkness.
I love her,
And she loves me.
I now look to the sea,
And know, I have found my love.
2006-06-18 16:56:42 · 12 answers · asked by Sammy Hagar 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
I like it and would like to copy it. ( 8-)) ) it is really Good.
2006-06-18 17:05:24 · answer #1 · answered by RTD 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hello dig digi....I see you're still writing the poems of love.It's a good one. I don't have one to answer you on this one.Looks like you finally found her. Good for you. Hope you liked my silly little sonnets and rhymes. I can't get into anything deeper right now. If I do, it will be too explicit.......(itsimpossible)
maybe something short......
Birds revolve around your love,
Now a swan,
Before a dove.
If you remember the reason why,
You know why they fall from the sky?
Your answer to this one..........~p~
2006-06-19 00:33:59 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
there's no such thing as love at first sight. hope you wont get offended by that.okey? what you feel is only a physical attraction to her implicit beauty. its not love. perhaps your only infatuated by her. remember this: love takes time to develop. its not about the physical but is more cencerned with personality.
well, i forgot you were asking me about that poem..honestly i like it. it was so romantic that it get on my bones. but i just dont like the idea. k have a nice day!
2006-06-19 00:04:12 · answer #3 · answered by jillian leigh 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cwoak-cwoak-cwoak!
:)))
Looks like poetry is going better in the morning than in the evening. :)
"""Foot in mouth,
Sitting on my brain.
Was an idiot,
Want to be friends again.
So sorry,
For what I have done.
Please forgive,
For my stupidity is undone.
Read once more,
My lines so dear.
For I am sorry,
Don't Disappear"""
2006-06-19 07:47:12 · answer #4 · answered by Hibernating Ladybird 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sarah?
2006-06-19 13:42:01 · answer #5 · answered by Syberian 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good. If it's for a girl you know, make sure she likes you before you give her that, or she's liable to think you're insane. Good luck!
2006-06-19 00:01:50 · answer #6 · answered by anonymous 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. Good work!
2006-06-19 00:00:41 · answer #7 · answered by N8ball88 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes it's great!
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2006-06-18 23:59:37 · answer #8 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What happened to Sarah????
2006-06-19 16:39:14 · answer #9 · answered by silhouette 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes that is very sweet
2006-06-19 00:00:32 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋