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Prophecies of Love

The duty of being a lover is to always be proper
Prompt into interaction motivated to the well being of each other
Dashing to the commitment of getting closer
By heart blinded to witness only one figure
with emotions yearning for closure
Mingling to bring pleasure
But one thought to treasure
In soul tormented by such one crime
The punishment of passion by design
In mind evicted and resigned
Bonded by the aura of your being
As I tame my unrest until the next opportunity
The lyrics of rhythm blunder
As what is to be said blossoms like a fever
Mounting only in intensity with each passing syllable
Discharging such vivacity with each word accountable
Leaving tenacity as the sentences form the miracle
One which only love can spawn.

2006-06-18 03:05:02 · 7 answers · asked by nauna 1 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

7 answers

yes, especially line 2 Motivated to the well being of each other.

2006-06-18 03:10:04 · answer #1 · answered by sparkie 6 · 0 1

really, i do luv ur poem but (no offense )i didnt really get some parts of it,i luved da rhyming though.keep it up but try to put a little more understanding in there.hope to see more poems on yahoo answers okay.im not trying to be mean.

2006-06-18 10:26:41 · answer #2 · answered by ♥D@t_bLaSiaN♥ 5 · 0 0

It's a nice poem, but it just not the kind I like. It just does not do much for me..

2006-06-18 11:31:39 · answer #3 · answered by tashasenior2005 2 · 0 0

Yes, I think your poem is very beautiful :)

2006-06-18 10:16:13 · answer #4 · answered by bettywitdabigbooty 4 · 0 0

Yes, very nice.

2006-06-24 13:01:08 · answer #5 · answered by jc20155 4 · 0 0

dun understand half of it..but if it makes u happy..i like it.:D

2006-06-18 10:07:32 · answer #6 · answered by MCR 2 · 0 0

yup

2006-06-18 11:28:03 · answer #7 · answered by Katie 3 · 0 0

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