My personal Demons
Deep down inside me this a dark thing that wants to break free. It has it grasp over
over me it makes me feel like life is'nt worth it all. Like death is the way out.I try
to fight it but its taking over.It's making me hurt my self and people around me.
It wants blood it needs a life.It's going to be the end of me the end of my life.I
could feel it i could feel its plan .It plans to drive me crazy it plans to take me
over. It plan's destroy all that i have all that i love .I know how to end it tring to
hurting other peole . The only way is having to end me. It's the only way to stop the pain
that it would make me cause
2006-06-18 02:51:49 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
As a write of poetry - I give you a hand of applause for this writing - seems that you write as I do - with what is real to you at the moment - keep writing, our world needs it
2006-06-18 02:54:10 · answer #1 · answered by MS L 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you so evil that it turned so dark?
well death is not the way out.
Straight path,pray to the allmighty
to help you out,to guide you along
to enlgiht your soul,
deep down within yourself heal you
making you enlight around.
with a bright light revolving around
2006-06-18 09:58:35 · answer #2 · answered by saleem k 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cause?
Hmmmm...
Interesting.
2006-06-18 10:00:33 · answer #3 · answered by elliebear 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very Good Poem.
2006-06-18 09:54:56 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
bravooo! i wish i had at least a bit of da talent u hv!!! ur poetry is toooo gud! a budding poet!
2006-06-18 09:57:18 · answer #5 · answered by wondermarvel_charmchith 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great question.
2006-06-18 09:54:59 · answer #6 · answered by Sherlock 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh lord please dont. i have the same feeling...please email me with the poem in it and the subject the name of the poem..
sam_star700@yahoo.com
2006-06-18 09:53:48 · answer #7 · answered by sam_star700 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool
2006-06-18 09:53:00 · answer #8 · answered by Jamie-Lee H 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was deep DAMN!
2006-06-18 09:53:23 · answer #9 · answered by LadyJ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋