once i found myself in a castle
where stood
i saw myself go
the walls flourishing elegant
shimmering potraits and perhaps a million more
a thousand
people on ships in the
sapphire sea
where nothing but treasures
could be seen.
i looked and let myself go
see the forests of glamourous
grassy green
where creatures layed on there
land to sleep
in the beauty of the beloved
i looked the other way to see the
mountain divided by thee
nothing other then darkness
where what used to be
2006-06-16 14:20:01 · 8 answers · asked by funnybayboys 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Visual Arts ➔ Other - Visual Arts
it sounds like a dream.
you should paint it, it sounds lovely.
like a fantasy novel.
2006-06-16 14:25:31 · answer #1 · answered by sharrron 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Promising.
2006-06-16 14:41:47 · answer #2 · answered by Darma 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need to start making money for these kind of things
2006-06-16 14:23:27 · answer #3 · answered by Nocsotulb 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's Okay
2006-06-16 14:22:58 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job.
2006-06-16 14:39:44 · answer #5 · answered by martin b 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like its good
2006-06-16 14:24:16 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah, it's ok...make it up urself? it's pretty good i think.
2006-06-16 14:23:37 · answer #7 · answered by ♥HOOTERS GURL♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's nice..
2006-06-16 14:28:46 · answer #8 · answered by wQ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋