i need to sleep, but i'm scared of seeing you again....you promise me its the last night you'll be there waiting on me, but again im climbing the steepest hill and your hand is reaching down for mine and the instant i see you eyes, i fall....fall deeper into what i hate. leave me alone, i get it "you have my attention!" youve had me since the hope was birthed in my heart the moment i grabbed your tender pure hands and knew you were the one who be so amazing i would have to destroy knowing im not worthy of someone of such intense embraces. what have i done? must i crush everything that is so magical, its real, yet you cant figure it out; so you dont. u just sit there and type and type and listen to music and smile cuz it doesnt hurt....it feels good to know i actually had something worth slitting my own throat for. but only if you smiled while i did it then kissed before i drained empty of all passion in your hands. i cant figure it out...hatred, love, pain, envy, jealousy, hope, deat
2006-06-16 08:59:28 · 10 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
dont know and i really dont care cuz im actually, actually okay. hard to believe huh? i could take a bullet to the brain and still live after this...id say id rather it fly ur direction, but id jump and save you because in fact, IF THIS WERE FACT, id still love you. im afraid ive already fallen.......asleep
2006-06-16 09:00:01 · update #1
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-06-19 18:23:34 · answer #1 · answered by Lira 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It could be polished into lyrics for a love song. If someone has not already copywritten it, (about $30), you could pitch it to an artist that you believe could convey it into a musical compilation. Copyright protection may be available if it is an original work. They have ways to determine if it is or not. A short form would probably surfice unless someone helped you to write it. They award protection to the first submission. An Intellectual Property Attorney could be worth locating if you learn that material is being exploited via this forum. Having it to your name here may offered some defense of ownership of work. Write ON!
2006-06-16 16:08:17 · answer #2 · answered by sheila_0123 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Absolutely!
2006-06-20 06:45:27 · answer #3 · answered by Plays With Squirrels 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, first try to correct all the grammatical and spelling errors. They way its presented it makes it hard to read and understand it.
2006-06-16 16:11:56 · answer #4 · answered by Finy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. too many grammatical and spelling errors.
2006-06-16 16:05:06 · answer #5 · answered by allend1980 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, it's good.
2006-06-16 22:57:54 · answer #6 · answered by doglady 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hire an editor first.
2006-06-16 16:05:47 · answer #7 · answered by mosalikewhoa♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes!
2006-06-16 16:04:06 · answer #8 · answered by cma80 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't give up your day job!!!!!!!
2006-06-16 16:55:53 · answer #9 · answered by wolftatx2 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah it should!!
2006-06-16 16:02:21 · answer #10 · answered by i rawkkk 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋