The cut you gave i cant ignore
My heart pours out onto the floor
I hurry to scoop it up and hide
The darkened secrets of my insides
Why cant i let go of past mistakes
Maybe i should ask as you who fakes
You who fakes and tries to ignore
Blocking out the pounding on your emotional door
I cant be the only one that feels this way
I can tell by the little hurtful things you say
I piece it back together again
Then try to go on and pretend
That i havent gone through all this pain
Which only puts pressure on the strain
Why cant I let go of past mistakes
Maybe i should act a you who fakes
You who fakes and tries to ignore
Blocking out the pounding on your emotional door
I cant be the only one who feels this way
I can tell by the little hurtful things you say
I'd say "lets drop the act its gone on to long"
But i know how you'll react, you'll ignore this song
2006-06-15 19:21:59 · 11 answers · asked by Mr. Ark 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Woah!! Did you write that? I was expecting some BS love song, not a REAL love song. I seroiusly thought it was awesome, and Im not fishing for points. I write songs too, just when Im bored, not for a band. That's from the Heart!...I'd title it "Tear Me Apart". That is what popped into my head after the first couple lines, and as I read it, that title sounded better. I think it is definately written out of retaliation, not simple minded hate, which makes it more real. I could feel what you meant in the song. Hats off to you Mr Ark, that was straight songwriting, not like the crap the masses buy into. Hey man, I wouldnt post your songs on here. They are good, and someone will steal them.
2006-06-15 19:34:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
Wow that's quite good. It's semi relatable to me, but relatable to a lot of other people. As for a title though I'd say Why? might be good, considering your chorus it asks that question. Also you have other points in there that are summed up with why, so the title that I say is Why?
2006-06-16 13:07:43 · answer #2 · answered by Hawk 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What makes you lovely by means of one path on account that I AM reallyyyyy insecure. And that music makes me suppose lovely. Also little matters by means of one path on account that that music simply describes the whole lot approximately me...the dimples in my again, the way in which I need to squeeze into my denims, and the way I hate the truth that I'm now not as curvy and thin as each different lovely lady/lady that walks by means of...
2016-09-09 03:58:57 · answer #3 · answered by hagenah 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it dosent say sont to me. i like ti, more of a poem than song but i guess all songs are poems. cat says it relats to me though. during school(i graduated last year) i did not see others as fakes i saw them as evil, hatefull trators andnot worth the flame of life they have. i know you song/poem though. a good name would be "revalation"...i think thats spelt right
2006-06-15 19:27:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You're in love but is not mutual? Is this it?
I think many people can relate to this. I would call it "broken heart", "fake" or facade.
2006-06-15 21:00:53 · answer #5 · answered by bwet 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can relate, title it "The Emotional Exit"
2006-06-15 19:36:39 · answer #6 · answered by snafudotcom 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow beautiful!!
according to me this song describes the pain and sorrow of a person badly hurt in love...so i wud say its a song straight from the hurt song of pain....
2006-06-15 19:27:35 · answer #7 · answered by Sne 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Title it. "I cant be the only one that feels this way."
2006-06-15 20:48:57 · answer #8 · answered by dragonsaver005 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very relateable. Call it "Cut" or "Bleeding"
2006-06-15 19:27:18 · answer #9 · answered by nightevisions 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow homes, thats pretty awesome
2006-06-16 13:01:14 · answer #10 · answered by Diaz 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋