yo,i give these fake MCS more fright than a white boy in tights\dont question whether i am wrong or right and dont get uptight at these words i spit\ima rip you up and your too scared to battle me so im not gonna trip\i get wild in the clubs like my homeboy lil flip\here a little tip for you,yo\gimme your cash,jewels and your girly and you'll go free without pain\cause i got the glock locked,****** and loaded\im ready to explode at any moment so dont push me\
what do you guys think?
your big dogg, Blaze
i dont mean to offend anyone..i just want to know what you guys\ladies think of my rap.
2006-06-15 15:24:49 · 23 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
As a mother, not bad at all. You kept it clean, you don't see that much anymore. I am proud of you. But, I'm not scared of you. I am old enough to be your mother. And you know what Mom's do.
Good Luck in your recording future.
2006-06-15 15:32:14 · answer #1 · answered by Dottie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You used way too many cliches, and easy rhyme schemes like rip, trip and flip. You also covered all of the things that everyone hears all the time in rap today. That's just me speaking as a hip hop fan since I was a kid whose heard it all before. I've even participated in a rap battle in New York and placed 2nd out of 16 m.c.'s, so I wouldn't recomend battling with that. Now, to be fair, on the positive side you didn't curse. If you could tighten it up with your own style and originality, you would get some respect for battling without cursing like Shells did when he won battle of the beats back in the late 90's.
2006-06-15 16:08:00 · answer #2 · answered by Sebastien 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How old are you? And how long have you been writing? This is pretty weak and generic. Your flow is WAY off(i.e. i got the glock locked,****** and loaded\im ready to explode at any moment so dont push me\). Your punchlines are far below basic......You mentioned Lil Flip in your rhyme, so that explains the reason for your lack of lyrical skill. If you're rapping just for fun, then pay no attention to this comment. If you, however, are trying to establish yourself as a credible emcee, then you need to follow this advice:
Listen to lyrical rappers such as:
1.Canibus ("The Canibus is an animal with a mechanical mandible/comin' to damage you")
2.Common
3.Rass Kass
4.Killah Priest
5.Last Emperor
6.Eminem(mainly for flow)
7.Chino XL(mainly for punchlines)
8.Talib Kweli
9.Mos Def
10.Jean Grae
Study these emcees. Better yet, go here http://www.ohhla.com
Aria
*The illnovelist*
2006-06-27 19:18:41 · answer #3 · answered by illnovelist 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am not a rap fan but it sounds pretty cool.. Start sending in your demo tapes to all of the record companies and see what happens!
2006-06-29 03:47:15 · answer #4 · answered by bddrex 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well ive never been a fan or rap, but id say try to work on your words a lil more
2006-06-26 03:26:06 · answer #5 · answered by cory a 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think what you need is a good rap along the side of your head
2006-06-29 07:14:17 · answer #6 · answered by AL 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You suck you really got stop.Its coming from a guy with talent and i Know how to rap.PLEASE work on it But I Know you got a nice peice there.
2006-06-24 15:08:11 · answer #7 · answered by Emmanuel P 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
crap is for fool
it aint cool
go back to school
or pick up a tool
and get to work
you stupid jerk
cause any fool can rhyme
when you got some time
2006-06-29 12:11:15 · answer #8 · answered by Jack Kerouac 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
man, you can't go saying you're all sugar with your girl, emailing her poems and stuff,on one post, and then try to sound like a gagsta mada faka in another...coherence!
besides, it sucks...haven't we heard all that before? DO YOUR OWN THING
2006-06-27 11:18:06 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I could here you Blaze. Quite good actually.
2006-06-27 17:22:59 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋