i need to sleep, but i'm scared of seeing you again....you promise me its the last night you'll be there waiting on me, but again im climbing the steepest hill and your hand is reaching down for mine and the instant i see you eyes, i fall....fall deeper into what i hate. leave me alone, i get it "you have my attention!" youve had me since the hope was birthed in my heart the moment i grabbed your tender pure hands and knew you were the one who be so amazing i would have to destroy knowing im not worthy of someone of such intense embraces. what have i done? must i crush everything that is so magical, its real, yet you cant figure it out; so you dont. u just sit there and type and type and listen to music and smile cuz it doesnt hurt....it feels good to know i actually had something worth slitting my own throat for. but only if you smiled while i did it then kissed before i drained empty of all passion in your hands. i cant figure it out...hatred, love, pain, envy, jealousy, hope, deat
2006-06-15 06:40:45 · 16 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
dont know and i really dont care cuz im actually, actually okay. hard to believe huh? i could take a bullet to the brain and still live after this...id say id rather it fly ur direction, but id jump and save you because in fact, IF THIS WERE FACT, id still love you. im afraid ive already fallen.......asleep
2006-06-15 06:41:22 · update #1
i wrote this at like 6 am this morning haha
2006-06-15 06:50:45 · update #2
YOU ARE GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-06-19 18:26:18 · answer #1 · answered by Lira 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
as long as your not doing or seeing any of this your ok. If you feel it then go for the gold and talk to someone about getting this published. You are an awesome writer and deserve alot of credit for this. Good Luck!
2006-06-15 14:18:28 · answer #2 · answered by Christy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was pretty deep dude!!!! got a little lost at the end but that was good I'm probably gonna be trying to figure out what is it esactly that you wanted you say all day....it was....mmm pretty good....I think you're just a pretty damm good crazy writer...
2006-06-15 13:47:33 · answer #3 · answered by lf 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I dont know who you're actually talking to but you must be on some pretty good acid
2006-06-15 13:45:48 · answer #4 · answered by Jimbo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was beautiful. What more can I really say? I would REALLY like to read more of your poetry. Keep it up, as I said..it was truly beautiful and moving.
2006-06-15 23:35:23 · answer #5 · answered by Shadowmyst 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
perfect explanation of how i feel right NOW in my life...weird...
i like it... you're not pyscho lol youa GOOD writer, you put your feelings down in a way that i cant...i make everythign flowery and perfect, and HAPPY.... life isnt happy all the time...i need to earn how to write liek that.....thats what im missing in my life...you've inspired me :) thanks for putting this out there for us :)
and good job!
2006-06-15 13:49:17 · answer #6 · answered by yourluvbug2003 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
crazy writer, attention catcher! nice writing.
2006-06-15 13:46:03 · answer #7 · answered by jelly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You should be a writer or an artist...good luck!!!
2006-06-15 13:44:30 · answer #8 · answered by Sweetness 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great stuff you'r a good writer
2006-06-15 13:46:23 · answer #9 · answered by quita 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dude. u've got mad writin' skills u should publish that stuff instead of lettin me read it 4 free..hee hee
2006-06-15 13:43:58 · answer #10 · answered by jordan asheley 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont think youre psyco or crazy! youre just in love. i think thats sweet
2006-06-15 13:48:21 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋