Poems" PASS THIS ONTO THE EARTH" Read my poem need feedback?

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Poems" PASS THIS ONTO THE EARTH" Read my poem need feedback?

HERE TO YOU MAY YOU KNOW THE HEART CAN CAN CAN YOU SMILE THERE YOU GO YOUR SMILING NOW HERE A SWEET SMILE PASS IT ON IT ALL I KNOW IT MY HEART I PASS THIS EARTH WITH SUNNY FACE TRYING TO UNDERSTAND OTHERS SMILING WHY YOU LOKKING I TRYING TO LIVE GIVE YOU HOPE I POET I WRITE WORDS HOPE FROM MY HEART TO YOUR HEART GIVE ME A SMILE PASS IT ON

2006-06-14 17:38:38 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay

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this poem offers the love and hope to the reader, that is, if there love there is hope. So the poem demands the heart with smile.

2006-06-14 17:53:40 · answer #1 · answered by digendra 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

your poem sounds like its from the heart good job

2006-06-15 00:45:09 · answer #2 · answered by Kiki 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋

:-) There is your smile...sweet poem!

2006-06-15 00:41:48 · answer #3 · answered by The Nag 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋