I would be happy to help you write your essay. Please pick a topic that you are familiar with. Have you ever been to the fair or public library? Well, which ever situation you have been in tell me and we will get started. You can reply to this message by clicking on my name or pic and then clicking the contact coloryst button. Best wishes
2006-06-13 08:05:09
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answered by colorist 6
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Okay, you really need to see your english teacher. First of all pick a topic, make sure its narowed down. You dont want something general i.e.: Sea Animals. You should go with a topic like this: The extintion of whales in alaska (just an idea). After u pick your topic. Follow these steps:
1) Essay Format:
a)Intro Paragraph ( with a "grabber" something that brings the reader's attention ex: quote from a book. Write the intro of the following 3 paragraphs. Include your thesis stament at the end.
b)Write your 3 paraphs discussing or proving your point. Use qoutes and citations
C) Conclusion: Dont discuss anything new. Just resume the major points. and close your arument or what you were discussing with a resumed statement.
There you have it all. You can search on Yahoo! for more help about how to write essays. I hope this helps.
2006-06-13 15:13:47
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answered by pj0091 2
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Choose to write a persuasive letter-essay to someone that doesn't like to do things...
Persuade-convince this person that going to the museum is "out of this world."
Write a 5 paragraph essay.
Introduction ( A few sentences about museums..and then write out the 3 reasons why going to the museum is a good idea)
Your 3 reasons become your next 3 paragraphs. Explain each reasons with your opinion and some facts.
And for your last paragraph, the conclusion.
Convince the person one last time that going to the museum is the best thing to do....try to find a quote about learning for example.
I hope this helped!
2006-06-13 15:08:58
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answered by Life is Wonderful 3
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I would but it seems like you are trying to do your homework by someone else. It is very unfortunate that you do not want to write your own essay. What you are doing is hurting yourself. Think about it in your school life you will have to write 100s of essays, long answers..how many times you will find someone else to write for you...? Even if you find every time, what will happen is that you will still not be able to write an essay even if you have a Masters Degree in some subject. I do not know what is your situation but if you really want help to fix your essay that can be done but writing for you is not only wrong, it is also very unfortunate situation for you. Remember the saying, " Buy me a fish, you will feed me for a day but show me how to fish, you will feed me forever." So dear learn how to write ..read and practice..soon you will be a master in writing. Don't loose hope..it is not embarrassing that you do not know but it is embarrassing that you do not want to know.
2006-06-13 15:20:53
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answered by from_nyc2003 2
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ok.....if you have ever been to a fair or aquarium or.......you know how it felt like plus what you saw yourself.so just start by saying the name of the place,where,time,how it looked,describe the inside but first the outside.then your experience over there and the special things that caught your eyes the most and the worst part of your visit.describe all that you can remember of the things you saw and then to conclude it,you can state if it was interesting,boring,cool and explain your reason for saying it.
if u need any more help,just contact me,check my profile on yahoo answers and IM which i prefer or email me.always online.or just add ty to my screen name that you see right now and i'll be waiting.
2006-06-13 15:09:51
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answered by ♥D@t_bLaSiaN♥ 5
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No.
2006-06-13 15:03:57
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answered by Pretty Knives 1
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