its played with a guitar
what do u think of my song???!..........
i copyrighted it ..soo what do u think??..
Daddy's little girl
Call me ur daughter
Call me lur life
Say am your baby
Daddy more than twice
Be with me always
Start a new relationship
One that doesn’t end me up
Cryin in a ditch
(Bridge)
Daddy im fallin
Plz don’t lime trip
Like ive been doin
Since I was six
(Chorus)
I want a telephone call
I wantcha to catch me when I fall
I wanna be your all
My hearts tired of slamming into walls
Every day is juz another cry
Every night I look in the sky
And wish that u love me..
Oohh daddy
Verse 2
U think achohol
And crack cockane
Is gonna ease all ur pains?
Thants why mom was through
You’ve always been so vein
I wanna love u
But u wont let me in
U close the door
Even when im crawlin under yo skin
(Bridge)
Daddy im fallin
Plz don’t lime trip
Like ive been doin
Since I was six
Chorus 2x
Laaaa oooooooooooooooooooooooo
2006-06-12 12:36:54 · 28 answers · asked by terminaltuna 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
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2006-06-12 12:44:49 · update #1
thatsh za mosht shtupidesht shong i ever heard
2006-06-12 13:00:57 · answer #1 · answered by *~dazzling.black~* 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Thumbs Up
2006-06-12 12:39:16 · answer #2 · answered by ••Mott•• 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly dear, it may be what you want to express or what you are feeling,and thats the core of writing music, but its more the words you use. Try not to be so predictable with your words, or sound so childish. Be real but think about it some more, how does this all work in together. Smooth out the edges and you've gotten yourself a song ;D
2006-06-12 12:43:34 · answer #3 · answered by Becca 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I get what you are saying but honestly it's needs some work. Some lines don't make too much sense ie. "One that doesn’t end me up", and "plez don't lime trip" (did you mean let me or lemme trip?) Good Luck and keep us posted.
2006-06-12 12:50:35 · answer #4 · answered by sunnyca 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds alright, you would have to hear it being played to pass a fair judgement.
2006-06-12 12:38:57 · answer #5 · answered by Ajescent 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
4.5 stars out of 5
2006-06-12 12:39:24 · answer #6 · answered by Carmy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good. But...uh, you may want to start using the spell check.
2006-06-12 12:38:39 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
well it sounds like a typical love song but its ok
2006-06-12 12:39:55 · answer #8 · answered by Matt 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a nice song, i like it only that it wouldnt fit with my life but its cool
2006-06-12 12:41:26 · answer #9 · answered by *OMG* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice, what was the inspiration behind the song?
2006-06-12 12:41:09 · answer #10 · answered by mkg101carp 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋